Adam was heading out of school when he was stopped by his friend
Joey. Joey handed Adam a disc at told him it was a fun game. Adam asked what
kind of game it was but Joey said he wasn’t allowed to tell. Adam really wanted
to know so he hustled to the subway station.
Once he was home, Adam tossed a frozen pizza to microwave. He
hurried upstairs to his room. In ten minutes he had finished his Spanish
homework. He brought the pizza to his room and put the disc into his computer.
the screen suddenly turned white. Dang it! he thought. He thought it was a
virus. He was so angry he was about to smash the computer but then a
large black N appeared on the screen. He clicked on it and instantly a
character appeared in the middle of a jungle. He moved his character around
using the arrow keys. He didn’t know what to do so he headed in the direction
of the sun. He couldn’t believe the graphics. It was almost as if he were the
character. After about five minutes of traveling, he came upon a snake. The
character grabbed a nearby stick at begun swinging at the dangerous creature.
The snake eventually slithered away. Then Adam had an idea. The character
quickly scaled a tree. Once at the top, he looked around. He was surrounded by
forest on three sides but he saw a castle in the direction he was already
headed. He climbed down the tree and scurried along. Another ten minutes and
the character arrived. Outside the castle was an elf. The elf silently motion
for Adam’s character to follow him into the castle. Once inside, the character
saw a few stone tablets. The first read:
WELCOME TO THE WORLD OF NURAX
FOLLOW THESE RULES
DO NOT TALK ABOUT THIS GAME IN THE REAL WORLD
DO NOT TALK ABOUT THE REAL WORLD HERE
YOU HAVE ONE LIFE, IF YOU DIE YOU CANNOT REJOIN
Adam thought that was simple enough so he went on to the next
tablet. It read:
CHOOSE YOUR RACE
HUMAN
BARBARIAN
DARK ELF
WEREWOLF
VAMPIRE
CAT-PERSON
DWARF
After considering his options, he decided to become a barbarian. The next tablet said:
CHOOSE YOUR PROFESSION
KNIGHT
GUARD
ENTERTAINER
THIEVE
TRADER
WARRIOR
Adam decided to become a trader. He thought it would be an easy
way to make money. The next tablet read:
CHOOSE YOUR ABILITY
FIRE
WATER
LIGHTNING
HEALING
INVISIBILITY
SPEED
STAMINA
Adam quickly decided on healing, thinking that might also make
some money. The tablet said:
CHOOSE YOUR WEAPONS
YOU GET ONLY TWO
THEY ARE BELOW YOU
Adam looked down and saw a extremely large chest. He removed the
lid and found it full of weapons including various swords, knives, daggers,
axes, hammers, bows, and crossbows. Adam picked thin, short crossbow and a
dagger with a gold blade and steel handle wrapped in red leather. Then he came
upon the final tablet which read:
YOU ARE ABOUT TO SET OUT ON YOUR QUEST
CHOOSE YOUR NAME
Adam went online and search for a good name. He came up with
Gladius. Gladius was now headed out the door. On the way to the city Gladius
was attacked by a dark elf. Gladius began to run with the elf right behind. Then
Gladius turned around and shot, hitting the elf in the elbow and leg. Gladius
walked back to the elf. He picked up the elf’s sword, shield, helmet, and 55
gold coins. Gladius then walked off with the elf pleading for help.
Once Gladius came to the city, he was amazed. There were people
everywhere. He went up to a human trader and attempted to sell the elf’s
weapons. He made 20 gold coins for the shield and 15 for the sword. Gladius was
thirsty and hungry so he bought a meal for 5 coins. Night was drawing over the
city and Gladius need a place to stay. He found a cheap hotel and paid 15 coins
to stay the week.
Adam looked at the clock at saw it was 6:30. His parents were due
home any moment! He hurried downstairs and set the table. He had just finished when
his parents arrived. He told them he needed to study for an upcoming test and
he doesn’t want to be disturbed. Then he ran back to his computer.
Gladius was waking up. He set looking for a cart to buy.
Eventually, he discovered a cart priced at 50 coins. He approached the vender.
After a while of bargaining, Gladius bought the cart at a price of 40 coins.
Gladius had seen a sign that there were arena battles in the center of town so
he headed there. When he arrived, battles were taking place. He set up
the cart outside the arena. Soon, two injured cat-people walked out of the
arena and towards him. He asked them if they needed healing. They both said
yes. One paid 10 coins and the other a scorpion stinger. Later on, a barbarian
headed towards the arena, stopped by. He wanted the buy the stinger for 50
coins. Gladius was blown away so he agreed. Now, with 90 coins, Gladius went
around traders buying more things. Once he finished setting up his cart,
Gladius had 3 knives, an axe, a sword, two breastplates, and a helmet all for
sale and still having 35 coins left. Just before he was about to pack up, a
group of 7 made of two barbarians, three werewolves, a vampire and a human
approached his cart. They said they were going on a quest but need weapons. He sold
the axe and sword for a wish crystal. Wish crystals can grant you one wish.
Gladius packed up and headed to the hotel for the night. Then Adam logged off.
it was 10:15 and he needed sleep so he hit the hay.
Adam woke up the next day and he was sick. His mom came into the
room after Adam yelled for her. She checked his temperature and he had a fever.
He had to stay home so it opened his laptop. Gladius had decided what he would
use the crystal for. He would not sell it, he would trade it. He went to the hotel
owner and offered the crystal for the hotel and 450 coins. The owner agreed as
long as she could stay at the hotel for free. Gladius could not believe his
luck. A single traveler walked in and came up to Gladius. He said that he
needed a room for a day. Gladius offered one for 5 coins but the traveler
didn’t like that. He kick Gladius over and pulled out his knife. The blade was
coming down at Gladius. Adam couldn’t believe it was ending like this.
Suddenly, The traveler was tackled from behind. The previous owner had saved
Gladius. Gladius was so happy he was still alive. He gave the last owner 100
coins before he went on the way. Gladius came upon two dwarf traders. They were
selling many animal parts from their recent hunt. After examining their products,
he decided he might try to hire them. He asked them if they would work for
him. They agreed. They said they wanted
to buy the shack next door to his hotel and turn it into a trade store. He
walked into the building with the two dwarves and asked for the owner. A small
dark elf came up to them. Gladius told him what he’d like. The dark elf turned
it down instantly but was pulled back when he heard the price. With the dwarves
chipping in, The shack was bought for 150 coins. The elf still had part ownership
and free lodging at the hotel. Gladius asked the dwarves to bring the three
carts (Gladius’ and each of the dwarves’) inside so they could set up. The
layout of the building was near perfect. They had a room for weapons, armor,
animal parts, food, and medicine and healing. There was also two back rooms for
cooking and storage. As the trio left, they saw a fight out on the street. A
barbarian was attacking a defenseless werewolf. Gladius pulled out his crossbow
and shot the barbarian but it was too late. The human had taken an knife to the
knee. Gladius quickly ran out and began to use his healing powers on the man.
In a few minutes, he was out of pain. Gladius then began to rummage through the
barbarians gear and take anything that was useful. The man approached Gladius
to thank him. He said he owned a construction company and if he ever needed
anything, just ask. Then it hit Gladius. He asked the man if he could build a
restaurant in the empty lot next to the hotel and a back hallway connecting
them all. The man agreed and Gladius got an extreme discount with a final price
of 25 coins.
Adam looked up from the screen. He was getting hungry. He went
downstairs and warmed up leftover pasta in the microwave. After eating, Adam returned
to his computer. He asked the two dwarves to go hunting. They set out towards a
mountain range which Gladius had never noticed before. Gladius waited in the
shop until they returned about an hour later, not looking in the best
condition. Gladius asked what happened. They said that when they passed the
graveyard, they were jumped by a horde of zombies. After a long battle, They
were cornered by three remaining zombies. Out of nowhere, a cat-person jumped
from a tree and saved them. They tried to thank her but she hurried away. So
they took all of the zombies gear, which there were loads of, and headed back.
Then they ran into two bear. They shot both of them and backed them up. Then
they arrived here. Gladius healed them and everything was back to normal. The
made bear stew out of the meat and put the rest bear on sale. After selling all
of the stew out on the street, the trio had a total of 1745 coins. They all
went to sleep. When they work up, the construction crew was already working. At
their pace, they’d be done before breakfast. Gladius had thought of an idea in
his sleep. He went up to the human, the one he had saved, and asked if he could
build an arena across the street. The human agreed at a price of 350 coins.
Gladius decided he would try hunting today and asked the dwarves to watch the
buildings. Gladius then set out. After half an hour of hunting, all he had was
a squirrel. He decided the gather berries instead. He sat down and started
shoveling berries into his bag. Once he finished, he looked up and saw a heard
of deer. He raised his crossbow and shot. Four deer had fallen before they were
out of sight. Gladius was satisfied with his work and headed back to the city.
When he returned, the dwarves made venison steaks, burgers, and stew. The stew
also consisted of berries that Gladius collected. Now with plenty of food. They
opened the restaurant. They earned 435 coins in the first day alone. Adam
looked at the clock. It was 6:15. He
went downstairs and set the table.
Like always, he finished just before his parents got home. They
had minestrone for dinner then Adam went back upstairs. Once he was on his
laptop again, the arena was finished. Gladius was planning to host a arena
contest tomorrow. He had put posters all around the town. Night was drawing
over the city again and Gladius went to sleep. When he woke up, there was an
hour and a half before the contest was to commence. Gladius, along with the
dwarves, walked into the hosts’ box at the arena. Crowds were gathering and
contestants were preparing in the chambers below. 15 minutes before the contest
the contestants walked out in lines by race in the order of dark elves,
dwarves, cat-people, humans, werewolves, vampires, and finally barbarians. The
first battle was between a werewolf and a dark elf. If the werewolf won, he
would receive the elf’s knife and if the elf won, he would get 50 coins from
the werewolf. The wolf began to strike all around with the elf dodging each
attack. The elf glanced the wolf with his knife and the wolf backed off. The
elf threw his knife hitting the back leg of the wolf. The wolf turned around
and charged, knowing the elf was weaponless. Just before he was about to finish
the elf, the elf disappeared. His power must be invisibility Gladius thought.
Then the knife started to move towards the wolf. The wolf realized too late
what was happening and the elf won. Medics rushed on and brought the wolf out.
A total of 76 battles took place before the main event, the free for all.
Everyone would fight at once. Battling as many people as they want and taking
whatever they want before they chose to stop. The only rule is you may not
engage someone already in combat. At Gladius’ command, the battle begun.
Several bodies littered the ground with medics buzzing around each of them. Eventually,
all that were left was the dark elf that won the first battle, and a large
bulky barbarian. With the power of lightning, the barbarian began zapping bolts
at the elf. The elf turned invisible and charged. Still invisible, the elf
climbed the barbarian. Wisely, the barbarian drew in lightning and zapped
outward in every direction, frying the elf. The barbarian won. He took about
100 coins and left. Adam looked up at the clock. It was only 9:15 but he was
tired so he decided to go to sleep. Adam couldn’t help wondering what being in
the arena would fell like. This was the lone thought on his mind as he drifted
asleep.
The woke up the next morning worse than before. His mom brought
him cinnamon toast and orange juice. She said he would have to stay home again.
Adam didn’t have enough energy to get up so he asked his mom for his laptop.
She gave it to him before she headed out to work. Adam logged on and Gladius
was just waking up. On his bedside there was a note from the dwarves saying
they were headed out to hunt. Gladius headed downstairs to the restaurant which
was out of food so he kept it closed. He went over to the arena and went around
picking up anything he could find. He left with 2 knives, a bow, and 5 coins.
He was walking out then he saw something sparkle in the sand. Could it be? He
walked up to it. It was a wish crystal! He scooped it up and hurried over to
the shop. He had no clue what you use it for. In a few minutes, the dwarves
returned. They had been out for awhile and returned with one bear, three deer,
seven squirrels, 4 rabbits, a sack full of blueberries, blackberries,
strawberries, and cherries. Gladius couldn’t believe it. They brought it all
into the kitchen and began preparing it. Adam realized he was thirsty so he
went downstairs.
He walked up to the fridge and reach for the juice. Then he froze
in his place. Something didn’t feel right. He grabbed the phone and dialed his
mom. It was too late. All she heard was Adam scream and fall over, the phone
with him.
I thought your story was excellent, especially the cliff hanger at the end. One thing you could fix is separating paragraphs so it's easier to read but otherwise great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat story! It had a good plot, and everything came together at the end. Your vocabulary and descriptive language was excellent, but next time you should include an author's note. Other than that, nice job!
ReplyDeleteVery nice story, I think you did a very good job. Maybe next time you could explain a little more what was happening towards the end.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Thanks for making me your main character.
That was a really good story. I like how you made the readers supesnsful because of the end, but I really want to know what happened
ReplyDeleteA lot of people have asked me to continue the story either in person or on comments. I just wanted to let you guys know that I am in the process of making it. It may be from a week to two weeks.
ReplyDeleteAlso, make sure you add an author's note in the next story.
ReplyDeleteThe second story (There may or may not be more afterwards) is coming out by next Monday
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